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“For conspicuous gallantry and intrepidity at the risk of his life above and beyond the call of duty.” These are the famous words on Major Bruce Crandall’s citation as well as many others for being awarded the Medal of Honor. This prestigious award is earned, by risking your life above and beyond the call of duty. Crandall showed every one of these traits, as he, under heavy enemy fire, rescued his wounded men and flew them to safety. Many brave men and women, fighting worldwide, have earned this medal, proving that the U.S.A. has some of the most outstanding soldiers in history. Though he seemed to be just another soldier, Major Bruce P. Crandall of the United States Army proved himself far more than that in his remarkable dedication and service to the United States of America.